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Broken2 by ~PorcelainFlower:iconPorcelainFlower:



I'm broken and hurt,
Can't you see me crying here...
No I suppose you can't.

There is no way around,
There is no denying it,
I finally have to break the barrier,
I have to admit that I am a broken piece of shit.

You can't really see me,
I'm not really here,
You spin your world right past me,
Leaving the wind to caress my ear.

I'm broken because of you,
You tore me up inside,
You left me all alone,
With no place to hide.

I hate you so much,
I love you so dear,
You are everything that saves me,
You are everything I fear.

I don't know how I came to this point,
Feeling like there is no way out,
I knew that I would be alone,
I never had a doubt.

I don't know why I am suprised,
I don't know why you did what you did,
You always broke me down,
You treated me like a little kid.

Was it fair for you to use me so?
Was it fair for me to spread myself so thin?
Who knows what fair is,
I couldn't even begin.

So don't give me your sorry's,
And don't give me your sad eyes,
You did this to me,
You forced me to say goodbye.

My heart is still tender,
I still care,
What I am wondering is,
Why you were never really there.

I want this to end,
I want to just die,
But I am not going to give up,
Because of some stupid guy.

So keep to yourself,
Don't come near,
Even though I still love you,
I will not fear.
©2004-2008 ~PorcelainFlower
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This is called broken because thats how i feel

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!southern5footer:iconsouthern5footer: May 26, 2004, 9:11:38 AM
this is raw emotion which is fabulous... have you ever thought of trying more symbolic imagery. This one sees to lend to that.

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